Excitement

Though I have been writing frequently, none of my poems have been post-worthy recently. This poem that I wrote the other day, somehow stood out to me. It just appeared out of nowhere. Let me know what you think:)

 Excitement 
Is like a tangerine
Orange zest grating against the 
Bitterness of the
Gyrating words that slip
From my lipid tongue

I nurse the youngness of this
New creature
Breathe life to the existence of the new
Child that
Thrives on the hope of the future
And knows not the entangled mess
That she has become